Tamenese's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Grid Animation]

Not bad

For what it is I think it's pretty good, only problem I have with it is that its a bit... plain, theres nothing wrong with the animation but I just feel that it could look a bit more cyber/electronic. Well whatever really, I liked it so thats a protect from me.

Fion responds:

I definitely agree with you, could have been a lot better. It was just a bit of fun anyway. Thanks for the review

[Super MX Brothers ep.1]

could be improved...

theres a lot of improvement that could be done on - i aint gonna complain but im just gonna sum it up by saying that your hand drawn parts are not up to scratch, now its fair enough if your new to flash or whatever but if you want to progress they will need improvement

also The Super Flash Brothers name/ logo/ whatever thing is already taken, they created the decline of gaming series (look em up ther great) so you mite wana think bout changin that

MrGruntsworthy responds:

okay, as you may have noticed, I changed the name. And yes, this was my first project in flash that i put effort into. Right now i'm testing my mettle in hand-drawn flash stuff--and i must say, the pictures look amazing. But i've yet to actually ANIMATE them. stay tuned!

[Sonic: Battles in Mobius]

Amazingly Fantastic

The movie is amazing, great fight scenes, i cant make out any distinct storyline but i dont really care.
Out-takes were fresh and good, the entire movie was great, easy 5

Then however, was the games - they were good but with thier own problems

The genesis styled sonic game was messed up, i spent the entire level walking an inch higher than the actual floor, and also i was running up a wall at one point, but it was still good at heart.
The RPG was good, easy to use and well styled, but however once i got below 500hp, everything went wrong. At some points he would attack me for more than my health and id lose very little health or even get recovered. Plus i saw it in my time of i wanna learn how to do that :@.

So overall, legendary movie worthy of frontpage.
Games need fine tuning, but were good anyway.

MidNightMaren responds:

Thnks!

[DBZ Training]

Well done

I enjoyed watching your prevois dbz flashes and you again provided another great episode, the only problem i would pick out of it though is that in my opinion the music is too...happy? well doesnt suit the theme whatever you wanna call it, im not sure if you were going for the music used in the anime or whatever though but whatever the case well done and continue giving great work

Tamenese
5/5

acicon-orig responds:

that last song was battle music from rurounin kenshin/samurai x i ddnt want to use another brolly music cos they wernt out to kill each other anyway =) tnx for the review

[coldplay - fix you]

Not bad

Its good animation and lip syncing, but a lil meebo (aint that those msn fingys) standin ther singin aint exacly the most interesting approach, plus in my opinion the song sucks lol (no offence) but i aint bias, so try and find a way of making it more interesting and you could score quite high.

3/5

unlimited071 responds:

thanks! will do!

[Fire Emblem Sprite Fight]

good

for a first animation it was quite good - theres a few sprite cockups but nuffin 2 serius, a few tweaks and is should run pretty smoothly - but yeh keep up the good work and you should do pretty well in life.......well....newgrounds life anyway...

Dragonman11 responds:

THanks for that, tweaks may be added later, but for now i dont have Flash anymore. I'll get it soon though...