Tamenese's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super MX Brothers ep.1]

could be improved...

theres a lot of improvement that could be done on - i aint gonna complain but im just gonna sum it up by saying that your hand drawn parts are not up to scratch, now its fair enough if your new to flash or whatever but if you want to progress they will need improvement

also The Super Flash Brothers name/ logo/ whatever thing is already taken, they created the decline of gaming series (look em up ther great) so you mite wana think bout changin that

MrGruntsworthy responds:

okay, as you may have noticed, I changed the name. And yes, this was my first project in flash that i put effort into. Right now i'm testing my mettle in hand-drawn flash stuff--and i must say, the pictures look amazing. But i've yet to actually ANIMATE them. stay tuned!

[Evolution of Earth]

Well said...

Fairly said, i share your views, mankind will end up 'evolving' until it destroys itself

However i do think that maybe you shouldnt of jumped straight from the dawn of mankind to the ww2/ modern eras, mayb add some more of like how we slowly destroyed and lowered ourselves to what we now call a civilisd nation/ society/ whatever. Apparently when humans were created we also killed a sorta superhuman race which were basicly us but better, shows how 'great' we really are...

[King of the Fighter No.1]

OWNAGE!!!

Thank you, just as i was starting to lose my faith in newgrounds due to immense noobage this comes in. It kicked absolute ass. Just one thing, next time why dont you try other characters other than constant Kyo vs Kyo (correct me if im wrong), the parts where he used moves that other characters were nice though but you have restored my faith in newgrounds.

Now I must go and blam some crap...

Tamenese
5/5

[Sonics Icy Resolve]

Its a nice lil flash

Its a nice lil flash but you have a lot of work ahead of you if you wish to suceed

Not critisisin just giving you pointers:

1) Length - Sprite flashes especially need to be long and interesting due to the fact that most people dont like sprites any more
2) Story - I dont perticularily care about this one but many others do - Without a story most will blam ur flash sayin 'omfg dis sux u r da suxxor lol n00b lmfao'
3) Sound Effects - I wasnt really listening but i dont think i heard sound effects - add some, otherwise just yell at me for ignoring stuff if im wrong

But overall i think you preformed this well and i wish you well in your flash....career (?)

[Sonic: Battles in Mobius]

Amazingly Fantastic

The movie is amazing, great fight scenes, i cant make out any distinct storyline but i dont really care.
Out-takes were fresh and good, the entire movie was great, easy 5

Then however, was the games - they were good but with thier own problems

The genesis styled sonic game was messed up, i spent the entire level walking an inch higher than the actual floor, and also i was running up a wall at one point, but it was still good at heart.
The RPG was good, easy to use and well styled, but however once i got below 500hp, everything went wrong. At some points he would attack me for more than my health and id lose very little health or even get recovered. Plus i saw it in my time of i wanna learn how to do that :@.

So overall, legendary movie worthy of frontpage.
Games need fine tuning, but were good anyway.

MidNightMaren responds:

Thnks!

[DBZ Training]

Well done

I enjoyed watching your prevois dbz flashes and you again provided another great episode, the only problem i would pick out of it though is that in my opinion the music is too...happy? well doesnt suit the theme whatever you wanna call it, im not sure if you were going for the music used in the anime or whatever though but whatever the case well done and continue giving great work

Tamenese
5/5

acicon-orig responds:

that last song was battle music from rurounin kenshin/samurai x i ddnt want to use another brolly music cos they wernt out to kill each other anyway =) tnx for the review

[oddworld: abe's mishaps]

Improve

This, if given a bit more time and effort will be a good flash, curently the background animation is plain and simplistic, the characters are great so just work on the backgrounds, also add about 3 more gags and this should pass with ease.

[Sometinbout Mary Lipsync]

1 complaint...

The loading bar on the preloader is white, and therefore invisible on a white background, this little fing can cost points off some people (although not too many lol) so mayb u shud use color on your flash or just draw a black box under the preloader so it shows, but besides that tiny thing this flash is great, the animation and drawing is excelent and the lip-sync was near perfect, keep it up

[Learn it - Sprite Movie]

Excellent

This is the best spriting tutorial iv found so far, most sprite tuts tell you how to use paintshop, which is gay, but this one gives an in depth description on how to use fireworks as well. The only problem i found is that sometimes i had to hit the button more than once to move on, could just be my comp but you might wanna check it, so yeh keep up the good work.

5/5
Tamenese

[coldplay - fix you]

Not bad

Its good animation and lip syncing, but a lil meebo (aint that those msn fingys) standin ther singin aint exacly the most interesting approach, plus in my opinion the song sucks lol (no offence) but i aint bias, so try and find a way of making it more interesting and you could score quite high.

3/5

unlimited071 responds:

thanks! will do!